Wrighter's notes-- this manga is something that i have been working hard on (I'm not much of a wrighter) and I would like it if no one would steal my idea. I post this on the net so that people could read it and give me idea's or tell me how good/bad it is. So please don't steal this idea.
&nb sp; &nb sp; ----------- Kanzen Kokoro
At the age of seven, Nova got lost in the forest behind his house. As he was trying to get home, he stumbles into a cave and fell through the floor. When he hit the ground below, a stone pillar pierces through his heart. While lying there, waiting for his last breath, a demon came from the shadows and asks him,
&nb sp; “Do you wish to live?”
&nb sp; Do you wish to keep your life?”
Nova nods his head.
&nb sp; “Now hear me, if I were to save your life, you must do two task for me…”
He looked at the demon carefully.
“First, within ten years you must marry my daughter, once you have done that you will learn of the second….will you agree?”
He nods before blacking out.
&nb sp; “Very well, just remember our deal…….”
A few minutes later, Nova walks out of the cave as his mother is calling for him. When he walks up to her, she quickly checks to see if he was hurt. All she found was a mark on his chest. She ask him were it came from, but Nova fell asleep before he could answer.
As time moved Nova became more or less of a “quite type” person. He had the highest grades in the school, but he had almost no friends. His parents died when he was fifteen, so he ended up living by himself. A family that lives near by asks to take him in, but Nova refused, saying that he needed to learn how to take care of himself. Once in a wile, Rei and Hiwatari (the children of the family) went over to spend time with him, but Nova tends to play video games (only when they come over) or draw, so the other two just watch him. (Basic personality of Rei and Hiwatari: Rei has a shy side, but is really aggressive, especially when it comes to her school work, and when Hiwatari slacks off. Hiwatari isn’t a “loud” or “quite type” person. He a really laid back person, is an average student, but slack off a lot we some thing is on is mind)
Every day the three of them go to school, talk before class (if they can get Nova to). Then Rei and Hiwatari go to class, and Nova goes to the top of the school. Since he has the best grades in the school, the other kids in his class tell him to teach them. Witch in turn aggravates the teachers. The only real time that he goes to class for school work is when a test is to be taken, but he always leaves in less than five minutes, and always gets a perfect grade on it. This really pisses off the upper classmen. They try taunting him to fight, but he ignores them.
Besides reading on top of the school, Nova really likes to draw. He would go into the art room a lot during his first two years, but the teachers began to complain and yell at him to stay out if he’s not got to his normal classes. The principle then made a deal with Nova, if he ever wants to go to the art room, he has to go to at lest three of his classes before he can go that day. Nova thought of this as an annoyance, but he consented. Later that day, as he was reading he thought of a picture based on part of that book. He thought about going to the art room, but…..
“Damn, already miss to many classes today…..this really is so boring having to wait…..oh well I’ll go tomorrow.
After school, Nova goes to town. There he goes to the art store and a takes a look at what they have. He never buys anything because he doesn’t have any money for it. The only money he gets is from the school, so they can have the “Smartest student” attending. Next he would go to the food store, then home.
Once home, Nova would put up his books, pick out what he will read the next day (since he’ll be going to class he’s only taking one). After he’s done he eats dinner, the plays game until he goes to bed.
That night Nova had a dream, about the event ten years ago….
&nb sp; “Don’t forget our deal….”
Nova wakes up.
“……yeah, like I could forget.”
He then looks at the colander.
“One more week…….ten years is a long time. I wonder what she’s like.”
The next morning Nova gets up as normal (for him anyway) and leaves for school. He meets up with Rei and Hiwatari and walks together the rest of the way. Once at school, Rei realized…..
&nb sp; “You’re going to class today?”
&nb sp; “Yeah…..”
&nb sp; “You want to use the art room today don’t you?” (Hiwatari)
&nb sp; “Yeah…..”
This bought no surprised to them, for Nova this is normal. When they got to class, Nova went straight to his seat, and sat down.
The bell rang, and the teacher came in, and started to take attendants.
&nb sp; “Hikari?”
&nb sp; “Here.”
&nb sp; “Rei?”
&nb sp; “Umm….Here.”
&nb sp; “Sakura?”
&nb sp; “Here.”
&nb sp; “Kentaro”
&nb sp; “Here?”
&nb sp; “Yuu?”
&nb sp; “Here.”
&nb sp; “Kazuki?”
&nb sp; “Here.”
&nb sp; “Nova, Tai…..”
Nova razed his hand up slowly wile his head is resting on his other..
&nb sp; “Here….”
Everyone looks over at Nova with amassment, and then started to gossip….
“Nova came to class?” (Boy)
“Didn’t he say that he hated coming to class?” (Girl1 )
&nb sp; “I heard that he’s the smartest in school.” (Boy)
&nb sp; “I heard that it goes as far as nation.” (Boy)
“Is he single?” (Girl2)
“I heard that all the girls from class B confessed to him, but he turned them all down.” (Girl1)
&nb sp; “Did he give them a reason?” (Girl3)
&nb sp; “No, he just said that he can’t.” (Girl1)
&nb sp; “QUITE!!”
The teacher yells out, all the kid turn to the front and stopped talking. The teacher then goes back to role call.
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When he finish…
&nb sp; “Class, we have a new student, her name is Sayu Ninami.”
She walks into the classroom and stood next to the teacher.
&nb sp; “Hi…I’m Sayu Ninami, age 17; it’s nice to meet all of you.”
All the boys sat there, looking at their new classmate. Getting interested the boys started to as…
&nb sp; “Where did you come from?”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “What is your favorite color?”
&nb sp; Do you have a boy friend?”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “Would you like to go out with me?”
She paused for a moment, then….
“Umm…..well…I came back from Kyoto, my favorite color is green or blue. And last I do have a boyfriend, in fact we’re engaged.”
Everyone stared at her in disbelief (guys with a disappointed look, girls with a look of admiration) as Nova is staring out side the window, about to fall asleep.
&nb sp; “Who is he, how long have you been together?”
&nb sp; “For now, all I can tell you is that he goes to this school, that’s why I moved back here. One I talk to him, I’ll tell you more tomorrow.”
The students started to talk, and once again the teacher had to quite them down. After…
&nb sp; “Ok, Sayu there is a seat over in the 2nd row…umm Nova raze your hand.”
Nova looked up the razed his hand.
&nb sp; “It’s the one next to him.”
She walked to the back and sat behind him.
For the rest of class, it stayed calm; when Nova finished the classes that he had to take he went straight to the art room. He got the paints and paper and started. The more that he painted, the more he got drawn into it. When he was finished he got out his lunch and started to eat. Soon someone knock on the door…
&nb sp; “It’s open.”
The door opens, and in comes the new student.
&nb sp; “Sorry, I didn’t think that anyone would be here.”
&nb sp; “That’s ok, I’m not normally here.”
Nova went back to his painting, checking for any mistakes that he might have made (like he would). Sayu takes a look around the art room, there goes behind Nova and says ….
&nb sp; “…I wonder, do you, remember…?”
This surprised Nova.
&nb sp; “Cause I’ll be really disappointed if you did.”
Nova then quickly turned around.
&nb sp; “W...what is it that I need to remember……unless you’re…”
“Yep, ten years ago you made a deal with my father, and in one week we get married. “
&nb sp; “…So you’re the one……but why did you come a week early?”
&nb sp; “What…… didn’t you want to see me?”
&nb sp; “It’s…… not that…”
&nb sp; “hehe...I just wanted to see what kind of person you are. From what I hear, you’re the best student here. All the girls love you, aaaand they’re roomers about you too.”
&nb sp; “Do you believe any of the roomers?”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “No…..but it wouldn’t matter any ways, you’re the one that father has chosen.”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “Yeah, about that, why he chose me, I’m only human.”
&nb sp; “Don’t know, he said he was going to tell us when the ceremony is done.”
They both become silent.
&nb sp; “…. If there’s nothing else I’ll be going….oh and get ready for tomorrow.”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “Hu… why?”
&nb sp; “Cause, I’m going to tell everyone about us.
For the rest of the day Nova thought about what the ceremony. (Why me?)
The next day at school, the whole place was in an up roar. More roomers were made about Nova, and even Sayu. Girls and boys came up to him asking why he’s getting married to Sayu (the first wanted to go out with him, the others wanted to kill him –sometimes vice-versa.) Because he didn’t feel like listening to them, he went to the roof top started to read. When a group of people went up there to find him, he hided behind the water tower, ending up falling asleep…
&nb sp; “Nova…..Hey Nova, wake up!”
As soon as Nova woke up, Sayu grabbed his arm and ran down stairs.
&nb sp; “Hey, w-what’s going on?”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “…Some one is after you.”
&nb sp; “Who would be after me?”
“I-don’t know, but I need to get you out of here as soon as possible.”
A large explosion from town, Startling Nova. Sayu stopped by a window to see where it came from.
&nb sp; “It look like who ever is after you has no since of discretion… we need to move fast.”
&nb sp; “Where are we going to go?”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “To the cave… where you made the deal with my father”
&nb sp; “…Why there?”
“Father told me to go there if and when we are attacked.”
After they reach the edge of town, Nova looked over too the park area, with over haft of it destroyed.
&nb sp; “All this, just to get me…”
Sayu then pulled his arm, and hurried to his house.
Sayu started to go through Nova’s stuff, throwing most of it into a bag. She then looked at Nova…
&nb sp; “Is there anything important that you want to take with you, we won’t be coning back for a while.”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “Just my sketch book.”
Nova ran into the other room and grabbed his sketch book, then ran into his parents’ old room and got a box from behind the bed. When he ran back to the room that Sayu was in, he handed the box to her, she looked at him and asks…
&nb sp; “What’s that?”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “Something my parents told me to hold on to?”
They went out the back door when they finished.
Running through the forest, Sayu held on to Nova’s hand, trying not to get separated. When they were deep in the forest, she slowed down so that Nova can catch his breath…
&nb sp; “We can wait here for now, there’s a river near by… I’ll go get some water.”
Nova waited under a large tree as the sun went down.
A little later Nova hears his name being called…
&nb sp; “Nova…Nova…Nova…”
The voce got closer. Then something out of the corner of his eye made him jump.
&nb sp; “What the hell are you doing out here?”
It was a kid dress in the same clothing as his school uniform.
&nb sp; “Why are you out here?”
&nb sp; Looking for you, everyone saw you running out of the school, so I was sent out here by one of the teachers to get you.”
Nova becomes suspicious when he didn’t say any thing about Sayu. He slowly approaches him.
&nb sp; “…I just came out here to get something that I had left the other day.”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “Ok then, we should go back to town.”
&nb sp; “Fine, but can I ask you something?”
&nb sp; “Yeah…?”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “Where’s Sayu?”
The kid was silent…
&nb sp; “Who’s Sayu? ……come on we need to get going.
Nova didn’t move an inch.
&nb sp; “Just who……WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?!!”
The kid turned around.
&nb sp; “I told you, I was sent to get yo….”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “BULLSHIT!! IF YOU CAME FROM MY SCHOOL, THEN YOU WOULD KNOW WHO SAYU IS!!!”
The kid started to ......
&nb sp; “Hehehehe… but I was told to get you…”
The kid’s personality changed, as well as his body…
&nb sp; “I was told that if I can’t bring you back willingly… well she didn’t say that you need to be awake.”
&nb sp; “Why are you after me?”
&nb sp; “I’m just doing what I’m told, and I really don’t care with whatever happens. Bringing you back means that I can become more than just a doll. Now then, are you going to come with me, or do I haft to waste more time?”
Nova was hesitant, trying to think of a way to run. The monster slowly walks up to Nova, while he backs up to a tree. When the monster goes to strike…
&nb sp; “Get away from him you stupid doll.”
Sayu jump in fount of the doll, defending Nova.
&nb sp; “Hello little demon, I’m sorry to say this but he belongs to my master.”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “He belongs to no one. Now leave before you regret it.”
&nb sp; “Foolish, do you think that a little demon like you can beat me, or my master, a god?”
(God???) Nova thought.
&nb sp; “I don’t care who it is, you’re not getting your hands on Nova.”
&nb sp; “Hehehe, then you will die.”
The monster and Sayu fight it out. Cuts go across Sayu’s body. The monster pushes her back, always keeping her on the defensive. Sayu the jumps over the monster and cuts it’s arm off. With a feeling of victory Sayu put her guard down…
&nb sp; “You think you’ve won little demon.”
The severed arm then shaders and the shards shot at Sayu, perceing evry part of her body. Sayu falls to the ground, uncon. The monster approaches her to finish her off.
--Badom-- (heart beat)
--Badom--
--Badom--
Nova start to have a sharp pain in his heart.
--Badom--
--Badom--
--Badom--
It hurts more and more, until he can’t breath.
Finally his heart stoped, the suddenly a bright light came from the left side of Nova’s chest…
&nb sp; “Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!”
the entire forest was engulft in the light. When the light disappeared, the doll was gone and Nova was out cool on the ground. Sayu moves over to Nova…
&nb sp; “Hay Nova, you still there?”
Nova didn’t make a sound.
&nb sp; “Hay… Nova… Nova, come on, wake up. Nova…”
Sayu stayed with him all night.
While Nova was out he had a strange dream.
&nb sp; - Human with a barrowed heart -
&nb sp; - Will you find Eternal -
&nb sp; &nb sp; - Or will you be lost to the tide -
&nb sp; - We’ll give you some time, so show us what your going to do -
The Next morning when Nova woke up…
&nb sp; “Uhh… what the hell, ow…”
Nova grabbed the spot above his heart. He then looked around for Sayu. She was right next to him, fast asleep. He looked at her, seeing that all the cuts were gone.
&nb sp; “She truly is a demon.”
Nova looked around, with his hand still against his chest.
&nb sp; “What the hell happened…?”
Sayu began to wake up. She looked up, and saw Nova sitting up wide awake.
&nb sp; “… Nova?”
She paused, and then jumped at him.
&nb sp; “You’re OK!!”
Nova looked at her.
&nb sp; “Y-yeah I’m OK, but what happened to that, thing last night?”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “You don’t remember?”
&nb sp; “No… well not much… I remember seeing you get hurt, then my chest started to hurt… after that, every things a blur.”
Sayu looked at Nova.
&nb sp; “Well, don’t worry. That doll won’t be attacking us ever. Now we need to get to the cave, I’m sure that doll’s master will be coming after us.”
&nb sp; &nb sp; “All right let get going.”
Nova and Sayu pick up their thing and started to move. After an hour of walking they reach the cave.